Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I definitely enjoy reading the comments from my peers. They're always really nice and supportive, which is cool little ego boost at the end of the week. The class project feedback has probably been more constructive than the story feedback. Often time I do not get a critique for my stories, which is fine since I don't usually go back and edit. But perhaps more constructive criticism would help me for the following week.

Reading other people work is inspiring and motivates me to work harder on my own writing. I try to always give something for the writer to improve on, but my peers are doing so great on their stories! Sometimes it's hard to find anything wrong!

By reading other people's blogs, I definitely get a sense of their personality! However, I am not getting to know people through commenting. I don't stick to reading the same people every week because I would rather read lots of different writing styles and switch it up often. I think the same can be said for my blog. I am very candid in my writing, so I think people are seeing the real me, but I don't think that anyone is really getting to know me.

I need to be better about bookmarking class projects I like. I think that it's fine to read different people's blogs every week, but these class projects are more comprehensive, so I should probably stick to a few people's projects!


I chose this image because while criticism is not often, there are definitely patterns which is what is important. If it mentioned twice it's doubly important.

Week 8 Reading and Writing




I have loved doing the readings, but I mostly enjoy doing the stories. I love to write so this has been such a great experience. I think that my favorite readings were the Egyptian stories, second place was the Japanese stories.

Notes: I definitely use my notes every week. I like writing a synopsis (even though that's technically not what we are supposed to do) because it helps me remember what are the big takeaways, the major plot points of the story. That way I am sure that my story is reflecting those major points. I also make notes to myself to remember what I wanted to focus on.

Stories: My biggest accomplishment of the class I think has been the Introduction for the class project as that was the most difficult, but it cam out well and I am proud of it. However, the story I had the most fun writing was the first story, Beauty Fight Backs. I was excited to write it, and I based it off of my favorite story formula: Beauty and the Beast. I am still most proud of that.

Image: Finding images is my least favorite part of the assignments every week. I don't put as much thought into it as perhaps other people do. I would much rather write. My favorite image used is from my story Martyrs Imprisoned. When I was writing and thinking about Christian martyrs being held by the Roman government, I immediately thought of Paul's cell which is in the Rome which I saw when I went.
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Prison cell of Saint Paul in Rome.
Photo by Edith OSB Source: Flickr
Looking Forward: I think to get more out of the reading and writing experience, I need to get back on top of my Class project. I feel so behind last week that I didn't have much time to write the first story for the project. That definitely isn't something that should be rushed, so instead I just decided to wait until next week to get started on it. I still am sure that it will turn out well, I just need to devote more planning time to it so that I can sit down to write effectively.

Friday, October 6, 2017

Week 7 Story: Mother's Love



She ran frantically through the forest. She would have stopped several times and let them take her, but she was running for someone else now. Her swollen belly carried the most important person she had never met.
She had told her husband not to get too deep into court politics, but he hadn't heeded her warning. He was murdered by his enemies, and now they were after her and his unborn child.
No time to worry about the past. She had to keep running.
Her legs were weak, her chest pounding. But suddenly, a more powerful shooting pain struck her.
"No! It can't happen now! No!" But her words couldn't stop her baby's arrival.
She searched everywhere and found a small gathering of trees in the middle of which she might be able to stay hidden. There she tried to stay as quiet as possible as her son broke out into the world.
She stared at her precious bundle, trying to calm the crying baby. She felt overwhelmed by her joy, until the reality of her situation dawned on her.
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Mother of Yellow River in China
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She was without a husband, without a home, and in the middle of the woods. Her husband's enemies wanted her and her son dead. Only the strongest of children could grow in such an environment. She must make make him strong.
She wondered the forest searching for a river, pain in each step. When she arrived at a rushing body of water, she dipped the baby down into the water and whispered a prayer of hope that her child would be strong enough to endure all things. The baby wiggled in her arms, and then went still. Once she had finished her prayer, she brought the baby out of the water. 
He wouldn't have looked any different to a stranger, but a mother sees all. She could detect the gold aura that clung to her son. And so she named him Kintaro, The Golden Boy. He grew to be the strongest of all men and the mightiest of warriors!


Author's Note: This is based off of the The Adventures of Kintaro, The Golden Boy. I stayed true to the story except in the original, it is never explained why Kintaro is supernaturally strong, which bothered me as a reader. So I decided to create a reason. Partly inspired by the story of Achilles and the River Styx, I gave him his strength by his mother praying while practically offering her son to the rushing river. Make of that what you will, but I see it as the river blessing the child with its force and energy.

The Adventures of Kintaro, The Golden BoyJapanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki (1908).

Tuesday, October 3, 2017

Reading Notes: Princess Hase, Part B

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Japanese Cherry Blossom
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  • Princess Hase writes a poem which saves the life of the emperor
    • stepmother is so jealous, she has a servant go out to the woods to kill her
    • instead of killing her, the servant builds a house for him, the princess, and his wife
      • they live out there as she waits for her father to find her
    • Father finds her, takes her home, she lives out the rest of her life happily
  • Hase is too obedient! Cinderella feel about the story
  • Why does she go with servant? Better reason needed
  • Maybe the emperor can get involved? He has seen and heard from her, and been saved by her on several occasions? 
  • Empower her or make her even more less capable of taking care of herself
Princess HaseJapanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki (1908).

Reading Notes: Kintaro, Part A

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Woodblock print
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  • father is disgraced and woman must run away to escape his adversaries at court
    • lives in woods. gives birth to son there
    • Son has crazy super-human life strength. 
    • Kintaro= golden boy
  • What made him so strong?
    • From living in the woods?
    • His father?
    • his mother? 
  • Why is he a golden boy?
  • What could his mother of done to make this "golden boy" truly special and different?
    • dipped him in a mystical river? 
    • prayed to the gods?
    • maybe his father was like that?

KintaroJapanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki (1908).

Monday, October 2, 2017

Famous Last Words: Getting it Together

This past week was a week of getting my life together. I had two presentations at the end of the week that I wasn't super prepared for, but went really well! It was a good weekend as I rewrote my Fulbright essays (AHHHH!) and I got hang out with my mom on Sunday. While I didn't have much time to do homework to prepare for this coming week, I still feel serene as I start this Monday.
However, as previously mentioned, I am working on my Fulbright application because it is due this Friday, October 6th. And I am freaking out. If this weren't for a class, I would be sharing some choice words. I'm scared as I finalize my application because not only am I applying for something that means a lot to me and would be so great, but it feels bigger than that. This is the most important thing I have ever applied to, both in terms of prestige and my own personal life. This could set me on a path that leads to greater things than if I do not get it. Honestly Fulbright is all I can really think about, and my school work is reflecting that. I am hoping that after October 6th, I will be able to refocus my priorities and get back to what's important in the here and now. We can only hope for the best!
Me on the Second Floor of the Eiffel Tower.
France: the country I will be living in for Fulbright!
It doesn't help that I am having some tension with my roommate recently, so I am hoping to resolve that going forward this week. Last week this tension was just an extra thing that was always weighing on me. So I really want to work this week on talking it out and being honest with her. Life is just a little bit harder when you and your best friend aren't on the best of terms.

Review: Languages



What grabbed my attention from the announcements was the note about the etymology of pundit. This was from the announcement on Friday September 29. I never knew that it was originally a sanskrit word! I love languages and how they get so mixed up, especially English since it's already such a mixture. I would love to learn more about what words we get from languages I would never think we have much contact with!

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The Sanskrit alphabet!
Madhumita1052 Source: Wikimedia

Reading Notes: Scheherazade, Extra

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Sceherazade by Sophie Anderson
POsted by Irina Source: flickr

  • King is marrying woman, killing them the next day because he hates women, thinks they are deceptive
  • Daughter of sultan's grand-vizir offers herself up to save all women
  • Tells her sister stories to stall being killed
  • This girl is so brave, I think that Queen Eleanor would love her character and story
    • I think I would want to cut the sister, keep it between her and the sultan so that I can further develop the sultan's character
    • Maybe the grand-vizir tries to save her, everything goes wrong?
    • Why didn't she run the plan by her dad? Where's her mom?
ScheherazadeThe Arabian Nights' Entertainments by Andrew Lang and illustrated by H. J. Ford (1898).

Thursday, September 28, 2017

Week 6 Storytelling: A Tree's Suitors



One sunny day, a carpenter was walking alone in the woods. He stopped when he saw a tree made from the most beautiful wood he had ever seen. Not wanting to risk such a great opportunity, he stopped immediately to carve a large piece from the tree. He wondered what he should design. He decided to carve the most beautiful woman he could imagine as only that would be fitting for the most beautiful wood. When he was done, he went into town to find men who could help him carry his statue.
Next came a jeweler who saw the beautiful carving. "A woman so beautiful is worthy of the finest jewelry." he adorned the statue with his greatest pieces. Seeing no owner in sight, he went into town to find some men who would help him carry it.
Next a tailor came down the rode. Upon seeing the statue beautifully carved and bedecked in fine jewelry, he thought "A woman so beautiful is worthy of the finest clothes." When he learned there was no one near to claim the prize, he headed towards the town to find some men who could help him carry the woman made of wood.
Lastly came a man who had lost everything in a fire. He had no home, money, food, and only rags to cover his body. He saw the beautiful statue with beautiful clothes and jewelry from afar. Looking around for an owner of the statue and seeing no one, he jumped for joy at his luck. He ran towards the statue in order to take her finery and sell it. Looking at the face of this beautiful woman, he was reminded of his wife he had lost in that destructive fire. He remembered how he had never been a rich man, but he had always been happy when he had his wife at his side. More than possessions, he wanted someone to spend his days with.
"Oh gods of life, love, and mercy! I beg you pity a sad, starving man. Though I may crave sustenance or wealth, I need to not be so lonely. Give me someone who will love me, and whom I can love as I once loved my wife." And with that he fell at the feet of the statue, weeping.
When the woman opened her eyes, she was surprised to find she had been given the gift of life. Having watched passerby's wonder before her tree for years, she had always wanted to take part in life the way they could. She looked down to see the man crying and her newly formed heart opened for him.
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"Mrs Richard Brinsley Sheridan". Painting by Gainsborough
Source: Wikipedia
"Dear sir, please tell me where I might be able to find somewhere to sleep for the night."
The man looked up in shock. Once the awe had faded enough to plan, they decided that they should go into town, pawn her finery, and find an inn for the night.
However when they got to town, they found a crowd of people. At the center of the crowd, three men were arguing.
"Let me take my men to bring it home for myself!" the carpenter shouted. "I created it originally from the tree!'"
The jeweler and the tailor began shouting about how they had both given up their finest goods to ornament it in the beauty it deserved.
"Wait," the carpenter said. "Isn't that the statue?"
The whole crowd turned to see the most beautiful woman in the finest jewels and clothes walking along side a man of obviously no fortune.
"What is the meaning of this?" they all demanded. The poor man explained how the gods had granted her life at his supplications.
"Well she should be mine!" The four began shouting.
The woman was appalled at the ferocity of the men who demanded to possess her based purely on her appearance. So she devised a plan.
"Gentlemen, might I solve this problem? I shall marry whichever man has the most to offer me."
The carpenter, the tailor, and the jeweler immediately began running home to grab their most valuable items to impress the woman. The poor man stood silently, puzzled at what to do. But soon he fell to his knees and began praying aloud. He asked the gods to grant him whatever he needed to win this woman he had fallen in love with. He did not ask for money or finery, merely whatever was necessary, calling for the wisdom of the gods.
After they had all returned, each man took his turn presenting what he thought would most impress the woman. She stood stoically, not betraying a hint of emotion. Three of the men had had their moment, leaving only the poor man left to present his case.
He stood before the woman, shoulders slumped, but hope in his eyes. "Madam, I am all I can offer," and he held forth his empty hands. "I only pray I can ever be enough for you."
Suddenly, a gold mist surrounded the man, shielding him from the gaze of everyone there. When the mist disappeared, the man was left standing. But now, he was dressed in simple, clean clothing. His face was shaved and hair trimmed. In his hands that were just before empty, he held a red rose in full bloom.
" I have made my decision." The woman said boldly. She pointed to the fourth man and merely said, "I'm yours."
The first three men shouted their protests. The crowd stood in awe. "Why?" several shouted. "He has the least to offer!"
"He has a humble heart. This is the most beautiful, most worthy thing which someone could offer."

Author's Note: This is a combination and retelling of two different stories, both in the Parrot's Tales saga. The Parrot Tales is a frametale in which a parrot must distract the lady of the house from going to meet with her lover. He tells these stories so she won't leave.
The first story I used is the The Goldsmith, the Carpenter, the Taylor, and the Hermit. Very similar to my story, each of the four men contribute their own specialty to creating a statue until the fourth hermit brings her to life by praying to the gods. However, she never talks. When they argue, they go back to the tree to see if that can judge who should have her, she returns to the tree. The moral is all things must return to where they belong/where they are from. 
The second story I borrowed from was the The Merchant whose Daughter Was Lost. In this a beautiful girl is asked to choose a suitor. In this she says that she will only choose the most wise/skillful suitor. She goes missing and each man uses his best skill to save her. After being saved, she is asked to choose. 
So for this, I stuck mostly with the first story, but rather than her returning to the tree, I made her in charge of her own fate. She puts them to the test and is confident in her choice. 


The Merchant whose Daughter Was LostThe Tooti Nameh or Tales of a Parrot, by Ziya'al-Din Nakhshabi (1801).


Tales of a Parrot: The Goldsmith, the Carpenter, the Taylor, and the Hermit

The Tooti Nameh or Tales of a Parrot, by Ziya'al-Din Nakhshabi (1801).

Wednesday, September 27, 2017

Reading Notes: Lost Daughter, Part B

  • There is a beautiful daughter of a rich merchant
  • He says that she can choose her husband
    • She says she wants one that is either very wise or skillful
  • Word spreads of what the beautiful, rich daughter wants in a man
    • Three suitors
      • one essentially knows all "knows what is lost, and the future"
      • Second can build a floating wooden horse
      • third is a great archer
  • Daughter says she will sleep on it
    • goes missing in the night
  • Father asks all three for help
    • The first knows what happened to her
      • she was kidnapped by a fairy and taken to the top of a mountain
    • Second builds horse to go to the mountain
    • Third rides the horse and shoots the fairy, brings the girl home
  • Parrot tells mistress that she will know if her lover is wise if he can say that the third suitor should marry the daughter

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The Merchant whose Daughter Was LostThe Tooti Nameh or Tales of a Parrot, by Ziya'al-Din Nakhshabi (1801).

Reading Notes: Parrot Tales, Part A

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  • The parrot is trying to keep the woman of the house from cheating on her husband
  • Every night he drops the name of a story, she is intrigued enough to stay and listen
    • By the time he finishes the stories, the sun has risen and she can't go
  • This time he tells of four men who were in the woods. 
    • Each man has a different specialty. 
  • As each keeps watch, they use their specialty to create a beautiful figure.
    • The last prays that the wooden figure because a real woman (very pygmalion)
  • The men fight over who gets her and everyone they go to to ask for advice ends up trying to claim her. 
    • They come up with dumb excuses. 
    • We never hear her speak up for herself. In fact she never speaks. Can she speak? Does she have thoughts and feelings of her own?
  • When they go to the tree for judgement...
    • Tree first splits open. 
    • She "ran" to rejoin the tree
  • Went back to where she belongs, where she came from


Tales of a Parrot: The Goldsmith, the Carpenter, the Taylor, and the Hermit

The Tooti Nameh or Tales of a Parrot, by Ziya'al-Din Nakhshabi (1801).