Wednesday, November 1, 2017

Week 11 Story: Thunder

     I can hardly remember my mother. I had been taken by  the thunder gods when I was so young that most of my life had been spent with them. Life with the thunder gods wasn't too bad. I couldn't participate in many of their activities as I was mortal, and they preferred their own kind too me, but they treated me well enough. However, I always knew that as soon as I could escape, I would find my mother and return to her. I knew the ways of the gods now, and I knew how to keep her safe.
     One cool, clear day was the perfect moment for my escape. Tomorrow would be the day of sacrifice, where the thunder gods called out to those that were promised to them. Today, they reviewed the list of promised sacrifices and anticipated the start of a wonderful new year.
     I went back to where the thunder gods told me they had taken me. I could only hope that my mother didn't live too far from there. I found the river from where I had been taken and looked around for any clue of where my mother could be. There was one worn path from leading from the river, but when I followed it, it only lead to an abandoned old lodge.
Autumn river bank
By Larisa Koshkina. Public Domain
     I was about to give up when I heard in the distance a woman singing. I followed the noise and saw a woman knelt at the river bank, singing a terribly sorrowful song. Her clothes were rags and she looked beaten by life. I approached her slowly.
     "Hello?"
     She looked up quickly. She opened her mouth like she wanted to say something, but snapped it shut. She stared at my eyes, searching for something.
     "My name is Ashish. As a young child, I was taken from my mother at this river by the thunder gods. I have been waiting all this time to find her. Do you know where she might be?"
     Suddenly she was up, her arms wrapped around my neck. "I always prayed you'd come back to me."

Author's Note: When I read the story An Indian's Vow to the Thunder Gods, I found it horribly sad. While I'm usually down for sad stories, this just seemed particularly poignant. The way she lives in fear of losing her child for years, only to be there when he is struck dead. And the imagery of her trying to leave him to be sacrificed, but by this point he is too old that he goes after her, wanting his mother, it was just too much to bear. So I decided to give it a happy ending.

An Indian's Vow to the Thunder GodsMyths and Legends of the Pacific Northwest, especially of Washington and Oregon, by Katharine Berry Judson (1910). 

Reading Notes: Vow to Thunder Gods, Part B


  • She never sends the boy. Years pass. The Thunder gods kill him while they are outside
  • Woman promises first born child to the thunder gods
    • This is not explained at all.
      • Why would anyone do this? There must have been a reason but it isn’t explained. It just says she hadn’t imagined the strength of a mother’s love
  • Every time a storm comes (which is the signal to send sacrifices which were promised to the thunder gods
  • She sings a sorrowful song about what happened and never has another child
    • Who was the father of the first child? Where did he go? Could it have had something to do with why she promised her child in the first place?
  • What if the boy hadn’t died?
    • He could go looking for his mother, or run into her somehow?
    Lightning strike
    (source)
  • What if she could do something to revive him?


Reading Notes: Ashish, Part A

An American Bald Eagle in a tree
(source)
When a god covets a man’s wife, he sends him away and tries to impersonate him
o Sends him away by telling him to find eagles in a tree. The tree keeps growing and he ends up way too high in the sky that he almost dies
o The wives can tell it is not really their husband. They can tell when he can’t perform the same in gambling and he can’t produce the same color fire. 
The man is saved by some random butterflies
Similar to the story of King David and Bathsheba
What happened when he got back? How can you punish a god for doing you wrong?
What was stopping the god from having the wife while the husband was away? All the people gambling just went back to their home.



Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Week 10 Story: Escape

     Anne was not afraid of the pains of childbirth. She had already known such great pains that she couldn't imagine anything worse.
     She had lost both her parents. Her stepmother had done everything in her power to make her life hell. She had been forced to marry the prince, who only wanted her for her great dowry. Her stepmother had wanted the prince to marry her own daughter, but money and power was everything for the prince. The prince was especially cruel.
     When she gave birth to her first child, and it was a girl, she was beaten for weeks by the prince. Anne wanted to love her child, but there was something about her. An inexplicable lack of connection between mother and daughter prevented Anne from caring for this child who caused her pain.
     Now it was time to give birth to her second child. When her stepmother, the midwife, announced that the child was again a girl, Anne was aware she should feel sad. Instead, she felt void of feeling. She had learned long ago that if there was a God, He wasn't on her side.
     It was announced the next day that due to Anne's inability to produce an heir, she would be beheaded, and the prince would marry her half-sister. Anne's stepmother would win after all.
     Anne sat behind bars, awaiting her death. Suddenly, a shadowy figure emerged from the recesses of the dungeon. Anne recognized her, but couldn't quite place her.
     "Princess Anne, my name is Sophia. I was your stepmother's assistant during the delivery of your children. She told me she would kill me if I ever told you the truth. But I must! I can't live with this!"
     "Perhaps you aren't feeling well," Anne said kindly. "Go lie down."
     "No princess! I must tell you, or this guilt will kill me before your stepmother can lay a hand on me. Your daughters are not yours. You gave birth to two, healthy sons. Your stepmother switched them with girls from the village so that the prince would give up on you and have you beheaded. She did all this so that her daughter might marry the prince!"
     Anne didn't know what to say, didn't know what to do. Unlike her lack of feelings after her second delivery, she now felt overwhelmed by every emotion she had been suppressing over the years. So much anger, grief, and sadness suffocated her, leaving her silent.
     "Hurry princess! I have made arrangements to rescue you and bring you to your sons! For I was in charge of killing them. Instead, I had a family watch over them until I could reveal the truth to you."
     Behind her, Sophia removed a large stone from the wall that led to a winding hall by which the two escaped the dungeon. Sophia explained that she had partnered with others in the castle who had turned against the crown due to the prince's brutality. They had put their plan into motion as soon as Anne's second pregnancy was announced.
     Anne lived happily in the countryside with her two boys for years. She was so happy that the only reminder of her pain was a few scars given to her by the prince. She had shared with her boys the truth of her past, but had taught them that they need not be anything like their father. They shared blood and nothing more.
     One day while Anne watched the boys play in the garden, a party of knights rode up to the house. "Anne, we are here to bring you and the prince's sons back to the castle."
     Anne pinched herself to wake up from the nightmare, but the knights remained in the garden. "What is the meaning of this? The prince is married. He wanted me killed. Does he want to finish the job?"
     "Your half-sister could not perform her duties and produce an heir. Rumor spread that you were in fact successful. The prince has already had your stepmother and sister killed and awaits your arrival to be remarried."
     "Very well. But I must ask that we do not depart until tomorrow. My sons know nothing of their origins. For indeed, who could explain to their children that they have the blood of a prince while they live like paupers?  We must also rest for the journey, for we have worked in the fields all day.
      The knights agreed and made camp just outside the house. But Anne had no intention of returning to her wretched life in the castle.
     In the dead of night, she and her sons escaped. They hardly stopped until they had arrived at a different kingdom where they could begin new lives. They were never again bothered by the cruel prince, and they lived happily ever after.
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Portrait of Anne Boleyn
Source: Wikimedia
Author's Note: This is based off of the story of The True Bride from the Marriage Native American series, but inspired by the stories of Henry VIII and his wives. In the True Bride story, the sons are replaced by a cat and a snake. It doesn't say that the prince beat her, but he did try to have her killed. At the end of the story, the wife does go back to the prince, but that bothered me, so I gave her a happy ending far from a prince that tried to murder her. Also a much happier story than that of Anne Boleyn and the other wives of Henry VIII. In the original story, the prince is attracted to her by her beauty, but also the fact that she could spit out golden nuggets. I wanted to remove all magic from the story and make it seem historical, since this pretty much happened with Anne Boleyn. So instead, I just gave her a huge dowry (and made the children girls instead of trying to explain how humans could give birth to animals). It is evident that this prince doesn't care for her, which is how he can beat her and easily have her and her family executed.

Reading Notes: The True Bride, Part B


  • Diamonds and Toads meets the story of Romulus and Remus. 
  • Did the prince really love her? Surely he wouldn't have had her killed if he loved her?
  • The Stepmother getting rid of the sons she gave birth to is especially cruel. 
    • Gives her a cat, then a snake instead of her children
  • Children are raised by dog
    • How old were they? Seem old enough... would they have known about their true origins?
  • How could that woman go back to her husband after he has her killed? 
    • How did she forgive him?
  • Once she was turned into a goose, why couldn't she be with her kids?
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Photo by Dick Daniels. Source: Wikipedia
The True BrideTales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson (1929).

Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Reading Notes: The Rolling Head, Part A


  • The use of the snake being the woman's undoing in very similar to the Hebrew creation story of Eve and the serpent
  • Father doesn't seem to feel guilty, only the children "regretted what he had done to them". 
    • As in they are not sad that he killed their mother. They are sad he made them eat her
  • Exploring the relationship between the father and children more
  • Maybe they don't mourn their mother?
    • only felt bad due to the rolling head
    • If there wasn't a rolling head, would they care if their father had killed her?

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Photo of woman at a lake. Source: pxhere
The Rolling HeadTales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson (1929).

Monday, October 23, 2017

Famous Last Words: Back on Track

This week I got back on track! I wrote my first storybook story, which I think went really well and I am excited to receive feedback on it. I had chosen the original story source long ago, towards the beginning of the semester. I have been thinking about that story since, so when it came time to actually sit down and write my retelling, it felt daunting. However, once I started typing, it started flowing. I am now ready and pumped to write the next story for my storybook. I hope I am doing Eleanor of Aquitaine proud!
I thought I knew which stories I wanted to do next for my storybook, but now I am not sure. I think I may have to spend a lot of time thinking about that this week, planning for my storybook. Unfortunately I am behind, so I can't do a planning post instead of writing the story. I am not too worried about it, it will just be harder since for this first post, I knew exactly what I wanted to do for the storybook.
I am also looking forward to the homecoming game this weekend! When I went to OU/Texas this year, I had really great seats in the student section. Sitting nearby was the "Soonerman" who dresses in an OU unitard for every game. He also waits the four hours before the game in order to get a front row seat at every home game! I started talking to him and I told him how I had always wanted to sit on the front row, but that I didn't have friends who were that interested in football who were willing to do it with me. So we decided for that this week's home game, I am going to wait with him ad grab a front row seat! I am so excited to see how different of an experience it is, being so close to the field. Hopefully it's worth the four hour wait, but only time will tell!

Friday, October 20, 2017

Week 9 Story: Waiting

     Dimena could never understand her mother. Nzambi was a beautiful goddess who lived on earth with everything she could ever want. And yet, she forced Dimena to stay with her at all times. She could never leave. She couldn't make friends, and explore the world.
     Sometimes her mother had visitors, mostly supplicants who begged her for help with their crops or their families. This was the most exciting time for her as she was able to see people talk to them about the world and their lives. They could never understand why the daughter of a deity would be interested in the lives of mere mortals, but they answered her questions nonetheless.
     Rumor soon spread of her beauty that was beyond what anyone had ever seen before. Dimena didn't feel comfortable with the men and women who stared at her so longingly, but they kept demanding that she be able to leave her mother and marry. While she didn't want to be subjected to the power of just another guardian, the idea of getting out of the same home she had always lived in, waiting on her mother, sounded wonderful.
     Her mother said that she would only allow Dimena to marry whoever could bring back heavenly fire from Nzambi Mpungu, the creator god who stayed in the heavens. Many tried, but none succeeded.
     Finally, there was a band of animals who were able to work together to bring the heavenly fire back to earth. Dimena silently cried tears of joy and pure relief as they entered her mother's throne room. She stood by her mother's side as she always did, ready to heed her commands. She couldn't help but think that this could be the last time she would have to stand waiting for her mother's decisions, owned and controlled by her.
     "I deserve to marry her as I risked my life, almost being burned alive in the bamboo!" said the rat.
     "But I pecked the hole by which we enetered heaven." said the woodpecker. "She should be mine!"
     "But it was my quest! I am the reason she was rescued!" said the spider.
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Nzambi Figure
Source: Wikimedia
     Dimena stood smiling, wondering which would be her husband. No matter what, she would be leaving the same throne room where she had been forced to stay for more years than she could count.
     "Well, if I give her to any of you, the others who do not win her will make her life miserable. I cannot do that to my daughter. So she will simply have to remain here with me. You are all dismissed." She waved her hand and Dimena's rescuers disappeared.
     "Dimena, fetch me something to drink. Perhpas the juice from yesterday. On second thought, I want fresh squeezed juice. Why are you just standing there. Go!"
      Dimena couldn't move. She couldn't feel. She didn't know what to think.
     "How?"
     "How what, my precious?"
     Dimena tried to speak, but she couldn't find her voice.
     "Speak up, Dimena. You know I won't tolerate mumbling."
     "How could you keep me imprisoned here?"
     "Imprisoned? Imprisoned! Ha! You live in a beautiful home with a mother who loves you more than anything. I am keeping you safe. The world is dangerous. You are too precious to risk. The world doesn't deserve you!"
     "I'm leaving," Dimena could hardly believe the words coming out of her own mouth, but she continued anyway. "I will not stay here, your slave whom you claim to love. I will be free!"
     "No you won't." And with that, the earth around Dimena rose. It envelopped her legs. She couldn't walk. "My only other other love, the earth will keep you here. Home. Where you will be safe."

Author's Note: This is based off the story How The Spider Won And Lost Nzambi's Daughter. In the original, we know nothing of the daughter except that she is beautiful. I thought it bizarre that the story mentioned how the daughter served her mother, even though her mother is a deity. So I decided to give her a voice, and imagine how the daughter would have felt I gave her a name and tried to explain why she would have remained with her mother after learning she would never be able to leave. 

How The Spider Won And Lost Nzambi's DaughterNotes on the Folklore of the Fjort by Richard Edward Dennett (1898).


   

Thursday, October 19, 2017

Reading Notes: Nzambi's Daughter, Part B


  • Animals must work together to free a maiden to be married
    • When they present necessary item to mother, the animals disagree on who should really have her
    •  The mother says because they all deserve her and are fighting over her, none of them can have her
    • The maiden waits on her mother for the rest of her life
  • People only want her because she is beautiful
    • is she smart? dumb? funny? serious? 
    • Does she want to get married or stay? 
    • Does she really want to serve her mother for the rest of her life? A servant in her own home?
    • Doesn't she want to get out and live her own life???
  • Maybe she wants to be married off, but is afraid of her mother's wrath. 

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Nzambi Figure
Source: Wikimedia
How The Spider Won And Lost Nzambi's DaughterNotes on the Folklore of the Fjort by Richard Edward Dennett (1898).

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Reading Notes: The Vanishing Wife, Part A

  • Guy gets the perfect wife, house and servants 
    • He has one job: don't let his wife see a fish's head. 
    • He gets lazy and stops cutting the heads off right away as he should, and so she sees it and he vanishes
  • Why wasn't the guy grateful enough or what he had that he couldn't follow through on his  one job??
    • Who else does this?
      • probably everyone.
  • In life we do the one thing we knew we weren't supposed to do. 
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Dude would press this button.
Author Chris Mckenna Source: Wikimedia
The Vanishing Wife: Notes on the Folklore of the Fjort by Richard Edward Dennett (1898).

Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Week 8 Progress

Overall I am really enjoying this class. I love the writing assignments and I definitely do as much of the extra cedit as possible. I did this because I knew I would reach a point in the semester where I had no motivation. Well the time has come. Last week I totally fell off the wagon and didn't most of the assignments. Everyone has those weeks, right?

For the rest of the semester, I want to change my schedule just a bit to start working on the coming week on Sunday. That way I can get ahead and have more time I can devote to story planning for the class project.

My motivation to push through the rest of the semester is to get to Christmas, drink lots of hot chocolate, and be a woman my dog can be proud of.